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I-----hereby confirm ownership of $ and $.

I use my membership player card to play in the casino the majority of the time.

My mother helped me collect the prize she saw me winning on slot machine.

She took the winner voucher to the counter, however, due to her lack

of English understanding and uninformed; she gave the clerk her Social Security as inquired.

A short time after, my mother handed me the money in cash.

The funds are already used for personal expenses such as food, clothing, entertainment, etc. 

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  • JOHN
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    1 month ago
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    I-----hereby confirm my ownership of $ and $.

    I use my player’s membership card to play in the casino most of the time.

    My mother was with me when I won on a slot machine and helped me collect the prize.

    She took the winner’s voucher to the counter; due, however, to her limited understanding of English and to her being generally not well informed, she gave the clerk her Social Security in response to his enquiry.

    A short time afterwards she handed me the money in cash.

    The money has already been used to defray personal expenses such as food, clothing, entertainment, etc.

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