How is my translation of what I written in Japanese?

Kanji
薨去な神
無数の枯死花
葉に浮ぶ

English
The dead gods
The countless drowning flowers
Which floats on leaves

Romaji
Koūkyona kami
Musū no koshi hana
Ha ni ukabu

Details to kanji
薨去 - Death or demise (Noun and particle)
な (Particle)
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