Fluent English speakers, could you help me with my English?

I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good as I'm not a native speaker. Should I change these lines to make it sound more natural? I would be grateful for any answers. A portion of the coastal population depended on fishing to make a living. Town dwellers used to raise livestock, engage... show more I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good as I'm not a native speaker. Should I change these lines to make it sound more natural? I would be grateful for any answers.


A portion of the coastal population depended on fishing to make a living. Town dwellers used to raise livestock, engage in gardening and small crafts. The transport links with the capital city were complicated. The town was becoming increasingly provincial.
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