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I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good as I'm not a native speaker. Should I change these lines to make it sound more natural? Following the death of the Duke, the town lost its political significance. The town saw increasingly less visits by the country’s rulers and the castles were... show more I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good as I'm not a native speaker. Should I change these lines to make it sound more natural?

Following the death of the Duke, the town lost its political significance. The town saw increasingly less visits by the country’s rulers and the castles were transformed into prisons. The town’s economy began to decline.
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