Your thoughts/comments on a short poem.?

A mixed day His world of dreams has just been awakened but there's no one there to meet him. He's alone in his own reality if he cried no one would hear him. If he shouts it falls on deaf ears if he's aggressive there's no sunshine on that day. With thoughts finally awake he tries to get on with... show more A mixed day

His world of dreams has just been awakened
but there's no one there to meet him.
He's alone in his own reality
if he cried no one would hear him.
If he shouts it falls on deaf ears
if he's aggressive there's no sunshine
on that day.

With thoughts finally awake he tries to get on
with daily reality.
Update: Not good eh?
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