Your thoughts/comments on a short poem.?
A mixed day
His world of dreams has just been awakened
but there's no one there to meet him.
He's alone in his own reality
if he cried no one would hear him.
If he shouts it falls on deaf ears
if he's aggressive there's no sunshine
on that day.
With thoughts finally awake he tries to get on
with daily reality.
Not good eh?
- ThomasLv 79 months ago
This should be in the Poetry Section bro.
It's a decent poem you old bloke. Not bad.
You have a navel-gazing lad suddenly awakened
by the facts of real life, preceded by dreams that
are somewhat troubling.
I love dreams, but this one is one I'd be glad to
be awakened from as well. Congrats