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Efforts of an individual and an organization to make a better world, such as decreasing economic inequality and encouraging international treaties, are of course part of innovation. As a result of innovation, you may be able to make visible results, but it doesn t have to lead to something visible. Simply making... show more Efforts of an individual and an organization to make a better world, such as decreasing economic inequality and encouraging international treaties, are of course part of innovation. As a result of innovation, you may be able to make visible results, but it doesn t have to lead to something visible. Simply making efforts and going ahead towards a goal can be regarded as part of innovation, in my opinion.
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