Fluent speakers of English, please, can you help me with my English?

I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good. Should I change this paragraph to make it sound more natural? Dig deeper, seek answers. Do the things that you have power over and do them the best you can. After all, you are here on this Earth to pursue higher goals, to achieve them and get... show more I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good. Should I change this paragraph to make it sound more natural?

Dig deeper, seek answers. Do the things that you have power over and do them the best you can. After all, you are here on this Earth to pursue higher goals, to achieve them and get everything you wish for.
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