zofija asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 6 months ago

Fluent speakers of English, please, can you help me with my English?

I need to translate a paragraph but my English is not very good. Should I change this paragraph to make it sound more natural?

Dig deeper, seek answers. Do the things that you have power over and do them the best you can. After all, you are here on this Earth to pursue higher goals, to achieve them and get everything you wish for.

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  • John P
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    6 months ago
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    It sounds like the sort of encouraging speech which a relentlessly cheerful "life coach" might make. I see nothing "wrong" with that piece, but I would hate to have the speaker as my boss!

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