Is this a good song to write for my girlfriend? Still Incomplete?

I've just came up with this 5 min ago tell me what you think... Is it enough to shatter windows with the beat of my heart? Is it enough to transform mountains with the thought of your eyes? Is it enough to blind the world with the smile you cast upon? Is it enough to climb the skies and with an ardent... show more I've just came up with this 5 min ago tell me what you think...

Is it enough to shatter windows with the beat of my heart?
Is it enough to transform mountains with the thought of your eyes?
Is it enough to blind the world with the smile you cast upon?
Is it enough to climb the skies and with an ardent scream,
Drop into your ears as if it were melody… I Love You?
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