Is this letter grammatically correct? if not, please correct me?

Dear Mr. Leo, I hope this email find you well. First time I bought Time magazine yesterday. i read the page one so there is one wrong grammar since Parkland, Fla. Florida is officially an abbreviation of Fl. Someone told me Fl. not Fla. since they live in Florida. Just I want to confirm if it is correct or... show more Dear Mr. Leo,

I hope this email find you well.

First time I bought Time magazine yesterday.

i read the page one so there is one wrong grammar since Parkland, Fla.
Florida is officially an abbreviation of Fl.
Someone told me Fl. not Fla. since they live in Florida.
Just I want to confirm if it is correct or not.
I am waiting for your feedback!
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