Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

Is this sentence correct:

"At the shopping mall, there is an interesting exhibition of life-size dynossaur dummies, endowed with motion, and that emit sound."

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  • 5 months ago
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    It is grammatically correct (except you misspelled 'dinosaur').

    But wouldn't be easier just to say the dinosaur dummies move and emit sound? 'Endowed with motion' is not grammatically wrong, but confusing.

    Also technically you wouldn't call them dummies. You might call them models or even 'robots'.

    Oh, and to be really 'perfect', it's an exhibit, not an exhibition. The words may be used interchangeably but don't mean exactly the same thing.

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  • 5 months ago

    I’ve been speaking English my entire life and I couldn’t tell you. School systems here aren’t great

    • Pontus
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      5 months agoReport

      Your school system might not be great. Some are fantastic.

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