Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

1. Is this paragraph correct: "My airplane wil arrive at 20:10 p.m. I certainly hope that there will be no delays, and I will try to take the first train AFTER THAT TIME to get to your house." (By 'after that time', mean the first train after I arrived the airport, have collected my luggage,... show more 1. Is this paragraph correct:


"My airplane wil arrive at 20:10 p.m.

I certainly hope that there will be no delays, and I will try to take the first train AFTER THAT TIME to get to your house."


(By 'after that time', mean the first train after I arrived the airport, have collected my luggage, and have passed through passport control desks.)




2. And is this sentence correct:


"I would like to ask for advice ON TRANSPORTATION to get to your house."

Or should I say:

"I would like to ask for advice ON WHAT TRANSPORTATION I SHOULD TAKE to get to your house."
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