It's your aversion to proper sentence structure and punctuation that makes you special.
How do students not have enough money to buy food and necessities:
financial aid is based on the parents income assets to age 24.
- some parents won't provide FASFA information, so their child is ineligible for financial aid
- some parents won't provide a dime for their children's college costs, although financial aid is based on the parent's contribution; or due to the parent's income the child isn't eligible for any financial aid.
- some students are apprehensive about taking loans. Thus, any financial aid that is loan based is "lost"
- some students simply don't get enough financial aid to cover - tuition, books & extra costs, housing etc.
delete "so" you aren't talking
change "just got" to "I've been" or I have been
change "into" to "to"
change "really good" to "good" (or "great)
university should not be capitalized
insert period after university.
remove "and although" (missing commons, if you had kept it)
change "I have to" to "I plan to"
remove "few", we got it with plural of "loans"
change "they're still not that much" to "they won't be excessive".
change "and my financial aid package is pretty good" to "my overall financial aid package is good" (assumes you received grants or other things funds because loans only sucks)
WOO HOO you have a period in the right place.
remove "at all"
insert period after "and"
change "I also have some scholarships" to "I received some scholarships"
remove "that help"
remove what (you are writing, not talking)
change "I'm wonderin gis why do I constantly hear" to "I'm wondering why I hear"
change question mark to a comma.
change period after themselves to a question mark.
And finally we have no more errors. Thank goodness.
I've been accepted to a good university. I plan to take out loans. They won't be excessive. My overall financial aid package is good. My parents are not wealthy, which is why my financial aid package is good. I received some scholarships, as well. I'm wondering why I hear storied of students struggling with food insecurity. Who can’t find a way to feed themselves? Life seems too good for me. I don’t understand why others struggle more than me. What makes me so special? I feel like I don’t deserve everything I have.