''Maybe he was already dead and this ship was taking him to the mausoleum that he's been spending his entire life in desire of paying?

his respect to.'' How do I correct it?

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  • 6 months ago
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    I have no idea what "desire of paying" means. But perhaps this expresses your thought: Maybe he was already dead, and the ship was taking him to that mausoleum that has been his obsessive goal for his entire life.

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  • Anonymous
    6 months ago

    "Maybe he was already dead and this ship was taking him to the mausoleum that he'd spent his entire life wanting to pay his respects to."

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