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I always choose the best answer: How do I correct this : ''But he was not scared. He wasn't there. He was staring to the distance.''?

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  • 5 months ago
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    ''But he was not scared.

    Do NOT start a sentence with a conjunction (But).

    'He was not scared

    '.

    He wasn't there.

    Drop the apostrohe'

    'He was not there. Only use the apostrophe when referring to speech in the written language.

    He was staring into the distance.''

  • 5 months ago

    "into the distance" would be better. Otherwise, this is actually very good.

  • 5 months ago

    The only thing wrong with it is the preposition. He was staring into the distance. Or He was staring off into the distance.

    Do NOT NOT NOT put a comma after "but". I wish people would not answer questions on here when they have no idea what they're talking about.

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      Lv 5
      5 months agoReport

      Goat Fuc ker you're blocked.

  • 5 months ago

    He was not scared, however, for his mind was elsewhere, and he stared into the distance.

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  • Bee V2
    Lv 6
    5 months ago

    But, he was not scared. He wasn't there. He was staring into the distance.

    Comma, staring "into"

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