I always choose the best answer: How do I correct this : ''But he was not scared. He wasn't there. He was staring to the distance.''?

Answer 1

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''But he was not scared.

Do NOT start a sentence with a conjunction (But).

'He was not scared

'.

He wasn't there.

Drop the apostrohe'

'He was not there. Only use the apostrophe when referring to speech in the written language.

He was staring into the distance.''

Answer 2

"into the distance" would be better. Otherwise, this is actually very good.

Answer 3

The only thing wrong with it is the preposition. He was staring into the distance. Or He was staring off into the distance.

Do NOT NOT NOT put a comma after "but". I wish people would not answer questions on here when they have no idea what they're talking about.

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Answer 4

He was not scared, however, for his mind was elsewhere, and he stared into the distance.

Answer 5

But, he was not scared. He wasn't there. He was staring into the distance.

Comma, staring "into"