Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

Do these sentences make sense, and are they grammatically correct: a) "Richard works ON HIS OWN ACCOUNT." (Note: By this, I mean that Richard is his own boss.) b) "When you are employed BY THIRD PARTIES, you are tied town to timetables." (Note: By 'third parties', I mean when you... show more Do these sentences make sense, and are they grammatically correct:


a) "Richard works ON HIS OWN ACCOUNT."

(Note: By this, I mean that Richard is his own boss.)


b) "When you are employed BY THIRD PARTIES, you are tied town to timetables."

(Note: By 'third parties', I mean when you work for somene, and particularly when you also have a place of work.)
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