What do you think of these song lyrics I wrote?

I wrote a song called "Strawberry Lemonade" for my band, here are the lyrics: Have you ever wondered what you could drink besides water that's healthy? have you ever been to Ireland and wondered why they created lemons? yeah well baby i'm about to tell you, strawberry lemonade, it's cool,... show more I wrote a song called "Strawberry Lemonade" for my band, here are the lyrics: Have you ever wondered what you could drink besides water that's healthy? have you ever been to Ireland and wondered why they created lemons? yeah well baby i'm about to tell you, strawberry lemonade, it's cool, it's fun, it's hip, and it's good for you, yeah I said, strawberry lemonade, it's fun, it's done, it won't shun, so come talk to mom when you're done, I said strawberry lemonade, yeah I did, I said it's cool, it's hip, it's a trip, if you have a dog named kip.
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