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I need to translate a poetic text but my English is not very good. Should I change this paragraph to make it sound more natural? I would be very grateful for any answers Nature heals. I discovered this during my walks along the coast. As I was stroking my hands across the wet sand feeling the sensation of the... show more I need to translate a poetic text but my English is not very good. Should I change this paragraph to make it sound more natural? I would be very grateful for any answers

Nature heals. I discovered this during my walks along the coast. As I was stroking my hands across the wet sand feeling the sensation of the energy it emitted in my palms. There is nothing more precious that the [wealth?]/gifts of nature.
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