Can you help me to write this sentence in a proper way? :D?

"The reason why I chose the faculty of Computer Science as my first option is because of the subjects that I will learn and the skills I will gain. Although I could choose Computer Engineering as first option, I consider Computer Science to be enhanced version of Computer Engineering faculty."

Please help me to write it in a correct way. Thanks in advance for your help.

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Computer Science Faculty, Computer Engineering Faculty

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    6 months ago

    I chose Computer Science as my first option because of what I will learn and the skills I will gain. While I could have selected Computer Engineering, I consider Computer Science to be an enhanced version of that.

  • Andy C
    Lv 7
    6 months ago

    to be AN enhanced...

  • Anonymous
    6 months ago

    The reason I chose Computer Science as my major is because of the subjects I will learn and skills I will gain. At first I considered choosing Computer Engineering as my major, I perceive Computer Science to have a curriculum that would be more beneficial to me.

    Edit: Faculty meant the teaching staff when I went to college

  • Alex
    Lv 6
    6 months ago

    Your statement is wrong. Computer science is software development. Computer Engineering is hardware, and is a specialty of electrical engineering. Computer science may study hardware a little, and computer engineering may study software, but one is not an enhanced version of the other.

    As for wording, how about something along the lines of "The reason I chose Computer Science over Computer Engineering is that Computer Science more aligns with my career goals and employment prospects for my geographical area."?

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