Can you please check my spelling and grammar...?

It's basically my attempt at writing a dating profile and I've been told I've made a bunch of errors. Please do not focus on the content/ message of my profile, just on spelling and grammar (since I've already asked for help on how to improve the content). 'Hi there, my name is Jane :)... show more It's basically my attempt at writing a dating profile and I've been told I've made a bunch of errors.

Please do not focus on the content/ message of my profile, just on spelling and grammar (since I've already asked for help on how to improve the content).

'Hi there,
my name is Jane :)

I'm more of a quiet, reserved person UNTIL YOU GET TO KNOW ME but in all
seriousness, I am a bit of an introvert but can be quite
social and talkative with people I am close to.

My hobbies are shopping, cooking, eating (lol), dining out,
watching TV shows, reading (online articles and stuff),
going to the cinema, listening to music, gaming (only a
little), messaging friends and the internet.

I find connecting with someone very important when it comes to
a potential partner. It's more than just the superficial
stuff (although I believe physical attraction to be
quite important too). Maturity, kindness, care, empathy,
friendship, romance, affection and loving are all
essential parts of connecting on multiple levels. I
strive to be like this myself although I'm not perfect,
but is anyone haha?

I am not a live for the moment kind of person haha, I'm more about where everything is
heading and looking for something deeper and more
meaningful. However, I'm all for dating and seeing where
it goes as it would most likely take multiple dates and
months of getting to know someone until I find someone
that's right for me.
Update: I no submissive woman! I do not believe in being the good, little housewife/ gf whose
interests and needs come second to a man's. If you want
someone like that, it's not me! I believe a relationship
should be about being equal. Man and woman should care
about each other equally
Update 2: There should be a deep concern
for one another. I do not subscribe to traditional
gender roles. I'm not really a feminist but I do stick
up for the rights of women since I am one.

I care
about honesty and integrity. Not into stuff like
clubbing, parties etc. More of at home person.'
Update 3: The main thing i noticed is 'I' instead of 'I'm no sub...'
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