Do you like my poem? Not meant to be too rhymey?

Jagged beams of light Shot from you at first sight Your dimpled smile took my breath away And in that moment I knew I wanted you to stay We talked all day through the morning light Your sparkling light green eyes Made me not want to say goodbye And when I laid down my head I dreamed of you holding me tight I... show more Jagged beams of light
Shot from you at first sight
Your dimpled smile
took my breath away
And in that moment I knew
I wanted you to stay

We talked all day
through the morning light
Your sparkling light green eyes
Made me not want to say goodbye
And when I laid down my head
I dreamed of you holding me tight

I promise to do my part
And always be faithful to you
So take care of my fragile heart
I know fairy tales don't exist
But I just can't resist
Hoping for a happily ever after
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