Please help with my English comprehension?

What's wrong to that phrase or mini text? "I went into the room and suddenly I saw the shadow of a man headed to the front door and pressing through down a small hole on the left side of the door. I couldn't see his face, but I noticed he carried a lantern in his right hand and a gun in the other. " show more What's wrong to that phrase or mini text?

"I went into the room and suddenly I saw the shadow of a man headed to the front door and pressing through down a small hole on the left side of the door. I couldn't see his face, but I noticed he carried a lantern in his right hand and a gun in the other. "
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