Does my poem suck?

A Poem Why have I never written such a tale I guess it never really sparked my need. You never think to tell your life With a pen or some ink over candlelight. Since I was young, I knew that I'd glean A little wisdom from everyone I ever meet. I'd synthesize their life, their loves, their losses Into a... show more A Poem

Why have I never written such a tale
I guess it never really sparked my need.
You never think to tell your life
With a pen or some ink over candlelight.

Since I was young, I knew that I'd glean
A little wisdom from everyone I ever meet.
I'd synthesize their life, their loves, their losses
Into a perfect amalgam of stews and sauces.

So here my swagger comes into these penned words,
You never really know how this poem could twist and turn.
But as soon as I get my rhythm with this thing
I'll fire cannons like David's sling.

This world hasn't actually heard me speak
There's a lion in here, and it's more than meek.
I've told my friends that I'll change the world.
You can all stand back and watch it unfurl.
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