Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 2 years ago

Grammar corrections just 5 sentences! Thanks?

Hi ____,

My name is ____ and I am a ____ student majoring in ______ and minoring in _____. I have 4 years experience volunteering as a social media moderator for liver disorder support group and also I was a research assistant for a communication professor on anorexia.

I would like to have an opportunity to learn more about the company and how I would be able to help. I am available the rest of the week and next week for a skype/phone call.

Thanks,

Update:

Maybe I should say: I have 4 years experience volunteering as a social media moderator for a non-profit support group...

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  • 2 years ago

    verbose.

    avoid compound sentences.

    'liver disorder support group'

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