What do you think of my group of haikus?

1

The huge crocodile

Angry at being disturbed

chased the young gymnast

2

The feisty betta

I scolded it for staring

And it swirled about

3

My pet snake, Pinchy,

Goes on adventures with me

Guarding me from harm

4

The cat stared at her

bathing suit, and then ran its

claws down her bare back

5

The giant wasp sped

towards the bound teenager,

stinging his bare butt

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  • 2 years ago

    elementary.

    haiku of that metre

    is meant to reflect nature in a zen style

    yet you have the metre correct

    and it has barbs..are you an angry young person?

    You might try free verse , it could be good to let fly.

    UNLESS OF COURSE IT`S A SPOOF..HOW UNUSUAL..

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    You've never read an real haiku, have you? You just recall that your kindergarten teacher said something about "5, 7, 5," which no actual English-language haiku poet pays any attention to.

  • 2 years ago

    crap

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    Great haikus

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