Do you see any grammatical error in my sentence? If so, can you fix it for me?

"Johnand I met because our love for the Salsa dance brought us together"

Does it make sense? Thank you!

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    John and I met because of our mutual love for Salsa dancing.

  • John P
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    As a better way of expressing that idea try: "John and I met through our love of Salsa dancing". And I wrote that form without looking at the answer by Cara!

  • Cara
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    "John and I met through our love of salsa dancing."

  • Laurie
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    Salsa need not be capitalized.

    I would change "the salsa dance" to "salsa dancing".

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  • 2 years ago

    In general, the term "salsa dancing" is used, because it isn't a single dance, but a style which includes a number of particular dances. So while you might say "our love of the Lambada" or "our love of the waltz," you'd say 'ballroom dancing," "square dancing," or "salsa dancing."

  • Kim
    Lv 5
    2 years ago

    It makes sense but would read better this way: Our love for Salsa dancing brought John and I together.

  • 2 years ago

    Our mutual love for salsa dancing brought John and I together.

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    John and I met because of our mutual love for salsa dancing.

    (Don't say "brought us together" because it's redundant. "Met" has already conveyed that.)

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    You need a space between John and "and". Looks ok otherwise.

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