Simon
Lv 5
Simon asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 3 years ago

Is the following sentence correctly written?

"XXX, wish you a joyful trip, don’t forget to bring an umbrella with you preventing from sunburn or shower in the afternoon."

I am an English learner, and your help will be much appreciated. Thanks.

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  • Anonymous
    3 years ago
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    XXX, I wish you a wonderful trip. Don't forget to bring an umbrella to protect you from sunburn and afternoon showers.

  • Anonymous
    3 years ago

    An umbrella cannot "prevent" a shower". An umbrella or sunshade can shade you from the sun when it gets too strong (but "prevent" is the wrong word).

    I might say: "Maybe bring an umbrella in case there's a shower, or in case the sun is very strong."

  • 3 years ago

    It's almost correct but doesn't really sound natural for a native English speaker. I'd probably say something more like "X, I hope you have a great trip! Don't forget to bring an umbrella to protect you from the rain and so you don't get a sunburn."

  • Kenny
    Lv 7
    3 years ago

    XXX sometimes refers to pornography .

    Source(s): So I am a prude .
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  • Anonymous
    3 years ago

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  • 3 years ago

    It's fine. Just use small lower case "xxx" which is of course to be kisses. Or maybe you didn't do that. It is in a style closer to British English than to the US.

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