here's my lyrics that i wrote like a month ago. please read it and tell me what you think! thanks!?

Question

Mid July

Sun in the sky

We were lying on fresh cut grass

You and I

Too young to die

Summer’s in the air all around

We both know that I drink too much

And love is a heavenly sin

But we Just ride…

Who cares if they're judging!

Baby we are still young; still young; still young

We have the right to be wrong

We have the right to be wrong

Let’s be the heroes of our own movie

Be the heroes of our own movie …

Let’s be the heroes of our own story

Be the heroes of our own movie …

.......We don’t have to hear what they say

.......We don’t have to live through the pain

Let’s be the heroes of our own movie

Or at least we can pretend to be

City lights

Those crazy night

My hands in your electric hands

Hazy lives

Those petty lies

We were too damn lost to be found

We both know that you smoke too much

And love is just a sweet disease

But we still ride…

Who cares if they're watching!

Baby the night's still young; still young; still young

Love's easier said than done

It's easier said than done

Let’s be the heroes of our own movie

Be the heroes of our own movie …

Let’s be the heroes of our own story

Be the heroes of our own movie …

........We don’t have to hear what they say

........We don’t have to live through the pain

Let’s be the heroes of our own movie

Or at least we can pretend to be…

Update:

They say loving you is a mad disease!

It's like driving a fast car with no wheel!

It's like driving a fast car with no wheel!

And I know how much you hate the truth

Cause one plus one is not always two!

Cause one plus one is not always two!

Let’s be the heroes of our own movie

Be the heroes of our own movie …

Let’s be the heroes of our own story

Be the heroes of our own movie …

be the heroes of our own story.....

Answer 1

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I love the vibe, but the presentation is a little disjointed. If you put this to music, let me know so I can see what your rhythm was intended to be.

Answer 2

it ain't bad