I finished another score! What do you think? P.S. I'm only twelve so it might not be good?

Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUTeE3xOhJY Here's the storyline: A man finds a beautiful and majestic island. He begins exploring it, hiking through the forests. Everything is pleasant and he's very curious. He starts to lose confidence about the island being great. He then sees... show more Here's the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUTeE3xOhJY

Here's the storyline: A man finds a beautiful and majestic island. He begins exploring it, hiking through the forests. Everything is pleasant and he's very curious. He starts to lose confidence about the island being great. He then sees another part of the island, and his wonder begins filling up. He finds several tigers, which start growling at him. His heart drops as they get up and begin walking towards him. The man starts running along the river as the tigers chase him and birds follow. Suddenly, he sees a waterfall! The tigers are about to get him, as he jumps down the long rush of water. He swims to the shore and begins exploring again. He has very little confidence and fear is beginning to swell inside him.
As he is exploring, all of the animals start gathering near him, ready to attack. The man takes out his machete and is ready to fight. Every animal one by one starts attacking him. He tries to fight them, but starts losing ground. He is backed into a corner and is eaten alive. All that the animals left was his heart, which keeps beating louder and louder as the animals rejoice and then it stops.
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