What do you think of my manga characters? Are they interesting or need some spicing up? 10 pts to who offers the most valuable feedback?
- 4 years agoFavorite Answer
I made a rough once-over of the three different characters you created.
Pre-caution: The following comments will be based of a 20-something year old lady who just finished degree studies and is yet to get hired by a/any at all company. It will be biased by unstable unemployment emotional issues, perhaps. Perhaps not. Perhaps this is all just the result of pure boredom. But here goes, anyway:
In a once-over read of the three characters, the first thing that crosses my mind when I read about them is how mainstream and unoriginal HALF of the essence of each characters are composed of. I think I've seen/read lots of characters from books, novels, movies, shows, animes that has HAD at least one of the characters you just created.
Now moving on to a short overall review of each of them:
Character A: Too painfully typical. I see a lot of this type of girls in shoujo-genred japanese anime.
Character B: Pretty used to this type of characterization too, in the anime world. But since I am a lady, I'll say this guy can be a man/ladies good senpai friend, or a person's worst boss. Maybe both?
Character C: I only read this character halfway through, actually. I think this character is okay, but the part where she is a self-proclaiming "pervert" added a strong SPICINESS to her character, and yeah, so I liked this. :D You can definitely keep this part about her, coz I think it will make her a really fun and interesting character to read more on, in a real story setting I suppose.
Good luck in your writing/fanfic/novel/project/work!