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Cindy asked in 社會及文化語言 · 5 years ago

問問有關英文句子的問題

We provide engineering services for our customers. Many contibutions have been made.

想問問以上句子有無問題。

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  • Jenkin
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    5 years ago
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    We provide engineering services for our customers.

    句子的文法和詞句都無問題,不過假如句中的"我們"是一組工程/技術部門的人,而寫這句是介紹"自己"的話,則是一句"沒有內容"或者句子內容沒"實質意義"的寫怍。

    寫句子要傳遞有意義和產生作用的信息才算"無問題"。

    例如:

    We provide engineering services, such as system diagnostics, equipment repair, maintenance service and upgrade solutions for our customers.

    這句把你們實際的功能寫出來,就算我把標題的"engineering services"名稱省去句子的內容仍然強而有力:

    We provide system diagnostics, equipment repair, maintenance service and upgrade solutions for our customers.

    但是原句中由ENGINEERING DEPARTMENT或工程師/技術人員提供的engineering services,就如講/寫一個醫生介紹自己是「提供醫護服務」或「我係醫人的」一樣講了等於無講。

    講咁長係因為第二句就係同樣的問題

    Many contributions[串錯字] have been made.

    再加上英文句法上由第一句的主動句式,這句變成了被動句式,這樣便破壞了你想延續解釋前面的句子的用意。這樣"玩技術"反而令全段出錯了。

    你第一句用We, 便應該全段都以WE作為主詞寫句子,當然不用句句都WE開始,要看你表達的內容。第二句的動詞或主旨是想講「你們有多少contribution」,所以基本上主詞仍是"我們"WE吧。因此可以直接例出或講出你心裏想講的那些many contribution是甚麼。或者甚至把前後兩組意思/意義組合來寫。

    We provide advanced innovative solutions and maintain system operation for our customers that contribute to ongoing revenue income and good reputation in the market for the company.

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  • 5 years ago

    (1)We provide engineering services for our customers

    (2) who are pleased with anything we contributed.

    (3)Do you consider contributions 5+1=6 to the sentence finds a duty or a pleasure? Nonsense !

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  • 5 years ago

    "contibutions" ~ spelling mistake

    Rephrase 過, 改了少少原意

    We provide engineering services for our customers. Many customers are happy with our services.

    講多錯多

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