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申琪瑜 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

文法訂正及建議

文法訂正及建議

大意:

這次黴運上身,被糾纏了很久,

至今覺得心内驚悚好難過,

哭不出,被閉鎖了一般。

一個人到底有無助淒涼悲哀時。

雖然沒出不堪的狀況,

還是心有餘悸,驚魂未定。

化解或復仇的方式,就是把它來

寫成故事算了。

我的寫法:

Bad luck entangled me for a long time.

I am still feeling distressed and thrilled,

I cannot even cry just like being is latched.

There is always moments of a person feeling desolate, helpless, and sorrow.

Although it's not an unbearable situation, I am still lingered with fear and shock.

The way to resolve or revenge is to make it as a well written story.

Update:

請確認一下...

是 bad luck has been entangled myself 還是 bad luck entangled myself?

3 Answers

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    6 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    直接就您的原有措詞作文法建議如下:

    Bad luck has entangled me for a long time,

    Yet I am still feeling distressed and thrilled.

    I cannot even cry out, just like being latched.

    There are always moments of one feeling desolate, helpless,

    and sorrowful.

    Although it's not an unbearable situation, I am still lingering in fear

    and shock.

    A way to resolve or to revenge is to make the whole event written as

    a story.

    Source(s): 羅莉 - 英文文法
  • 6 years ago

    TOMING88: Could you please double check on your answer?

    其他人: Got any other suggestions?

  • 6 years ago

    The bad luck has been entangled myself for a long time,

    Still feeling distressed and thrilled;

    Cannot even drying out, just like being closed and locked.

    Always a moment when a person feeling desolate, hopless,,and sorrow to be.

    Although it is not an unbearable situation,

    I am still haunted by fear and shock,

    The way to resolve or revenge is to write it down

    As well written story in order to rememnber it.

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