啟豐 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 5 years ago

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From the study, it was also found

that adults had high consumption

ability therefore adults will spent

more money on the online shop.

Remarkable result to emerge from

the data is that >1000 HKD the

respondents said that consumption

>1000HKD on the online shop was

bought watches

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從這項研究中,

發現成年人有高消費能力

因此,有消費能力的成年人會花更多的錢在網上商店。

數據比較顯著的是> 1000 HKD

受訪者表示消費

> 1000 HKD

是因為在網上商店買手錶

而且網上商店上的款式較多以及較零售商便宜

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In response to Question 4, most

Of those surveyed choose that

colthing and accessories .

The respondents said that

internet was very convenience

therefore they always shopping

on the online shop

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在回答問題4,

受訪者選擇了

服裝及衣著附件。

受訪者表示,

因為互聯網是非常方便,隨時隨地都可以瀏覽

因此,他們總是在網上商店上購物

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From the study , it was also found that when the subjects were asked about “Do you use online shop?”.The respondents said that yes.This demonstrated that they are not strangers about the online shop.Online shop is very extensive because their type of product is too many. Moreover the consumer usually shopping on the online shop. They think online shop is convenience.

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從這項研究中,我還發現,當受訪者被問到關於 “您是否使用網上開店?”時.

受訪者說,是。

這裡證明了他們對網上商店並不陌生。

網上開店是非常廣泛的產品,因為它們的種類實在是太多了。

此外,消費者通常對購物網上商店。他們認為,網上商店是方便。

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In conclusion,

The popularity of online stores will not lower than retail shop .

Moreover online shop do not deliver any rent in disguised form Lower costs .

therefore now there is a lot online shop on the market

moreover Inexpensive and Convenience is a major feature of the online shop

that is reason why online shop is popular

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結論,

網上商店的受歡迎程度並不比零售商店低。

此外 網上商店並不需要支付任何租金變相降低成本。

所以現在市場上有很多網上商店

而且價格便宜和方便是網上開店的一大特色

那就是為什麼網上商店可以流行起來

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  • 5 years ago
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    From the study, it was I(study 只是文件,有意識,會去”發現”的是研究者)also found that adults have high consumption abilities, therefore adults they will can spend more money on at the online shops.

    The remarkable result statistics from the data to emerge from the data is that > the purchases are larger than 1000 HKD, for which the respondents said explained that because those onsumptions >1000HKD on spent at the online shops was bought were buying watches, and the watches were cheaper than the ones purchased from retailers.

    In response to Question 4, most Of those surveyed respondents chose that colthing and accessories, The respondents they said that internet was very convenient, therefore so (改變一下用字,勿總是使用therefore)they always shopping on at the online shops

    From Depending on (勿總是用from表達)the study , it was I also found that when the subjects were asked about“Do you use do online shopping?”The respondentsif they say said that “yes”, which This demonstrates that they are not strangers about to the online shopping. Online shop is very extensive prosperous because their the types of products of it is are too many. Moreover, the consumers usually shopping on at the online shops often due to they thinking online shopping is convenient.

    In conclusion, the popularity of online stores will is not lower than retail shop . Moreover Furthermore, online shops do not deliver pay any rent so they can in disguised form Lower the costs in disguise, for this reason, therefore now there is are a lot online shops come into being on to the market, and moreover inexpensiveness and convenience is are a the major features of the online shop, that which is the reason why online shop is popular

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