冠穎 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

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Taipei Zoo

Good afternoon everybody!My name is Tyler. Today I want to tell

you about my excellent trip durning summer vacation.

We go to Taipei by car , it took three hours. Into the Taipei Zoo, we got off the bus, first we go bird watching, we see many very special birds, including parrots most attract people's attention, because their body plumage color is so beautiful, and they will Contact people say Hello.

Next we see the koalas, most of koalas are sleeping, but they are very cute, and some also eat the leaves close their eyes too! Very interesting.

We bought souvenirs, after a long, only to go back to Taichung.

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    Taipei Zoo

    Good afternoon everybody! My name is Tyler.

    I want to tell you about my wonderful trip during summer vocation.

    It took my family three hours to go to Taipei. After entering to the Taipei Zoo, we got off the bus. At first, my family went bird watching, we saw many unique birds. The most attractive one is parrots because of the plumage color of their bodies and they often say Hello to people.

    Then, we saw the koalas. Most of them were sleeping, but I thought that they were still cute. Some koalas were eating the leaves which were at their sight. They were very interesting.

    We bought souvenirs before going back to Taichung.

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