冠穎 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

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Taipei Zoo

Good afternoon everybody!My name is Tyler. Today I want to tell

you about my excellent trip durning summer vacation.

We go to Taipei by car , it took three hours. Into the Taipei Zoo, we got off the bus, first we go bird watching, we see many very special birds, including parrots most attract people's attention, because their body plumage color is so beautiful, and they will Contact people say Hello.

Next we see the koalas, most of koalas are sleeping, but they are very cute, and some also eat the leaves close their eyes too! Very interesting.

We bought souvenirs, after a long, only to go back to Taichung.

我知道這篇短文錯很多,哪位高手能幫忙修改,謝謝

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可以把字弄整齊嗎?不要拆開!!

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  • 6 years ago
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    要注意用過去式喔,因為事情已經發生了。我參照你的做了一些修改,不知道會不會太深。你參考看看。 Good afternoon, everybody. I am Tyler. Today I would like to share with you my trip to Taipei Zoo in last summer vacation. We went to Taipei by car, spending about 3 hours to reach there. Into the zoo, we headed for watching birds first. We saw many special birds, such as parrots, which most drew the attention of people because of their beautiful and colorful plumage and being able to mimic human’s languages, such as “hello”. After that, we also saw the koalas. They were very cute but spent most of time sleeping. We also found some koalas close their eyes while eating leaves. That was so interesting. We also bought some souvenirs and then went back to Taichung after a long stay in the zoo.

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