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NOIR asked in 社會及文化語言 · 6 years ago

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A week before, Tai Wan government found out that there was gutter oil sold out by some factories in Tai Wan. This led a series of restaurant or cake shop get into trouble. Those tainted- cooking oil will make people have a higher chance in getting cancers. Now, all shops stopped selling products made by those oil and accept citizens refund to them.

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  • Gary
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    6 years ago
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    A week "ago", "Taiwanese" "G"overnment "discovered" that gutter oil was sold by some "Taiwanese" factories. This "created a panic" to a series of restaurant "and bakery". "The" tainted oil will "increase the chance" in getting cancers. "Currently", all "impacted stores" have stopped selling products made by "this tainted" oil and "accepting" refund "request".

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  • 6 years ago

    A week before, (^the) Tai Wan(Taiwan) government found out that there was gutter oil sold by some factories in Tai Wan(Taiwan).

    This led a series of restaurant or cake shop get into trouble.

    (Because of this, a lot of cake shops and restaurants got into trouble.)

    Those tainted- cooking oil will make people have a higher chance in getting cancers.

    (Those tainted cooking oil will increase people's chance of getting cancer. )

    Now, all shops stopped selling products made by those oil and accept citizens refund to them.(allow citizens to get refunds for purchased food products made with the tainted oil)

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    Good luck!

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