英文自傳文法問題

小弟最近求職需要英文自傳,但英文並不是太強。

所以寫完後不知道文法是否有錯誤,

不知道大家可否幫我看看有哪邊需要修改的嗎。

My name is Richard Lin, I was born in Taiwan, on April 8th, 1988, 1977. I spent my childhood, school years and my adulthood there.I have two siblings.. My family is part of who I am today. I have always been a high achiever. My favorite subject at school was math which aroused my interests to calculation and numbers. I was a member of the and the while pursuing my studies and have been an active member of them for the last few years.

It's been said,"practice makes perfect. " Therefore, I do a lot of do more than what is required.

In my school years, I had learned how to get along with others. As an adult, I have learned to respect myself as well. I truly enjoy spending my leisure time with my family as well as surfing on the reading, and go jogging. I believe that we should live life to its fullest capacity and cherish all that it gives us.

I am a/an friendly and reading person. My work experience has given me the chance to train myself to be attentive and efficient. I feel that both these traits are important in both our social and work environment.

With my outstanding credentials and background, I believe that I could be a productive member of as a/an and to grow proud with you.

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  • 6 years ago
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    我看都沒啥好修改的

    我覺得最後一段可以再好一點

    像是:我將來要...希望...

    Source(s): 自己
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