夜兒 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

英文句子的文法

這句是我自己寫的

可是總覺得怪怪不知道文法和標點符號對不對

請可以幫我修改一下

when you have a foreign client ,and you can speak the language of the client ’s

can make you gain an advantage over your peers

Update:

還有幾句中翻英的句子

1.在過去,腳踏車主要是做為一種交通工具。

然而,騎腳踏車現在已經成為一種熱門的休閒活動。

2.對現今的許多學生而言,在課業與課外活動間取得平衡是一大挑戰

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  • 6 years ago
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    When you have a foreign client and you can speak the client's language, you have a clear advantage over your peers.

    我加了clear,句意比較明確

    1. In the past, bicycles were used mainly for commute.

    However, cycling is a popular recreational activity nowadays.

    2. Now, for many students, balancing between school and extracurricular activities is a big challenge.

    2014-08-13 17:11:12 補充:

    "colleague"

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    6 years ago

    If you have a foreign client and you can speak his language, you can gain more advantages than your peers.

    Bicycle was a major vehicle in the past but riding bike becomes a hot entertainment right now.

    For many students it is a challenge how to balance the activity in or out of class.

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    6 years ago

    How about:

    Being able to speak the language that your client does makes you more competitive than your coleagues.

    It makes you more competitive than your coleagues if you can speak the language that your client does.

    我覺得 foreign 可以不用翻出來.

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  • 6 years ago

    Error and correction for a smoother English:-When you have a foreign client and you speak the same language as he does, can give you an advantage over your peers(=same age, social status).

    The translation from C/E:-

    (1)In the past, the bike is mainly used as a means of tranportation. However, the bike has now become a popular leisure activity.

    (2)Many students today, in making a balance between academic and extracurricular activities, has meant to be a big challenge.

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  • 6 years ago

    可能這樣說會通順一點:

    When you have a foreign client and you speak the same language as your client does, this can give you an advantage over your peers.

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