In the middle of the book cover, there is a boy who seems doing experiments(making invention). Hence, the book cover is really attract me to read this book as I love doing experiments. From the title, I guess the boy is George and I predict that he loves doing experiments as me.
Can you give me some feedback and help me to make the vocabulary more beautiful?
留意寫book report應該用report speech(過去式動詞時態)。
there is a boy要轉there was a boy?
- JenkinLv 76 years agoFavorite Answer
In the centre of the book cover, there is a boy who seems to be doing experiments (making an invention). Hence, the book cover  attracted me to read this book because[as沒有錯的，但是用because作解釋更明確-as用於因果關係時指一般的推論或估計] I love conducting[doing有點中文feel”做實驗”，英語不用do experiment的，會講/寫to conduct an experiment / to carry out an experiment] experiments. From the title, I guess the boy’s name is George and I predict that he loves to experiment[由於上句已講出”做實驗”，這句不用重寫一樣而可以把重點寫在loves to 一樣叫experiment(verb)-你可查字典多認識有些字同時是名詞但亦可作動詞，便可增加你寫句子時表達同一意思時可以把字寫成動詞句] as I [由於是動詞句，”我”便對應I loves to exp，”我”同樣的不是受體(object)，所以不是用”me”，me too = so do I，這句的意思是I DO love to experiment / conduct experiements.].Source(s): 只能修改少少你寫的內容，其實你的表達也很清楚...留意寫book report應該用report speech(過去式動詞時態)。