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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

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Hello everyone,today i want to introduce 佛光山 buddha memorial center.

Recently because of the 清明 festival,my family and I went to 高雄 to visit buddha memorial center.

There is a giant buddha on the main building.

Around the square are eight towers.

We saw lots of swallows flying around the square,

someone said swallows only live in good place,

we think because there has a relic of buddha: a buddha's tooth

so those swallows feels its a stately place.

We worshiped the buddha's tooth,they said it will clear yours sins if you (walk) around the tower (with confession.)

We also drew some fortune slips from buddha as a souvenir.

I think (there is worthy to visit) even you are not a Buddhist.

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非常感謝!!!!

Update:

我改成這樣 請英文專家好心幫我看一下

Hello everyone,today i want to introduce 佛光山 buddha memorial center.

Recently because of the 清明 festival,my family and I went to 高雄 to visit buddha memorial center.

There is a giant buddha on the main building.

Around the square are eight towers.

Update 2:

We saw lots of swallows flying low around the square,its a rare scene.

We worshiped the buddha's tooth,they said it will clear yours sins if you walking around the tower (with confession.)

We also drew some fortune slips from buddha as a souvenir.

they also had 4d movies about buddha's story ,

Update 3:

but we dont had enough time to watch

I think this place is worthy to visit) even you are not a Buddhist.

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  • 6 years ago
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    Hello everyone. I would like to introduce to you BuddhaMemorial Center at Fo Guang Shan, where my family and me went visit on last Tomb Sweeping Day. 
There is a giant Buddha statue sitting on the main building. Around the square are eight towers. Lots of swallows flying low around the square,which is rare to see. 
We worshiped the tooth relics of Buddha. They said it would cleanse your sins if you walk around the tower while confessing.

 We also drew some divination slips and kept them as souvenirs.

They also had 4d films about Buddhism, but we didn’t have enough time for that. 

I think this place is worth a visit even if you are not a Buddhist.

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