靖憲 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

求英文好的人幫我

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Hello everyone, my name is XXX, I graduated from CHIN PING junior high school, and its my pleasure to introduce myself here. I know English is important in our daily lives, it’s a worldwide common language and learning English can help me extend the world view, I want to study abroad in the future, so I must to study harder than other student in senior high school, I know Rome was not built in a day, I will persevere in the lessons, I wont let you disappointed. I think one day I can speak very well, so please give me this chance to prove

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    Hello everyone, my name is XXX. I graduated from CHIN PING junior high school, and its my pleasure to introduce myself here. I know English is important in our daily lives, it’s a worldwide common language. Learning English can help me extend the world view, therefore I want to study abroad in the future. By being able to study abroad, I must study even harder than other students in senior high school(在國外通常高中會直接說 High school所以"senior"可以省略!). I know Rome was not built in a day, and I will persevere in the lessons not to let you down. I think (用"I think" 感覺比較不肯定,如果要有自信一點的說法可以改成"I know") one day I would be able to speak English very well(well也可以用fluently替代,fluently是流暢的意思), so please give me this chance to prove myself right.

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