無心. asked in 社會與文化語言 · 6 years ago

請問這句話文法哪裡有問題?怎麼改比較適當?

People in Taiwan has right to decide our own fate,including not signing unfair business pact to protect our benefit and leave a democratic future for our offspring.

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    6 years ago
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    People in Taiwan當主詞, 這要用第三人稱複數來措辭, 不論作者是台灣人或台灣以外的人士:

    People in Taiwan have the rights to conduct their own fate, including not

    signing unfair business pacts to protect their own interest and to leave a

    democratic future for their offsprings.

    註:

    單一家族的後代子孫用offspring;

    眾人的後代子孫用offsprings.

    二者都是集合名詞.

    Source(s): 羅莉 - 閱讀經驗
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  • 6 years ago

    We, the people in TW, assert the right to decide our own fate, including rejecting an unfair pact for self-protection and leaving a democratic system for our offspring.

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  • 6 years ago

    People in Taiwan have rights to decide our own fate,including not signing unfair business pacts to protect our benefits and leave a democratic future for our offsprings.

    Source(s): me
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