LauMing asked in 社會及文化語言 · 6 years ago

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在Excel 人名表中,成績不合格的學生資料需要更新.

The students who the result failed in the name list of Excel form should be updated.

成句句子既Grammar 有冇問題呢?

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  • Anonymous
    6 years ago
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    「在Excel 人名表中,成績不合格的學生資料需要更新.」- 這句首先要弄清楚意思:(一)人名表是所有學生的總表,分欄包括今年就讀有考試(合格與不合格)和沒有考試,和今年沒有就讀等等嗎?

    (二)學生資料指的是什麼呢?單單是名字嗎?

    如果上述問得正確,意思是「分欄目的學生人名表,成績不合格的學生一欄有錯誤,(例如以前不合格但現在補考合格的仍包括在內),需要更新。」中文句可改為

    「在Excel 學生人名表中,需要更新那些是成績不合格的學生。」

    英文句"The students who the result failed in the name list of Excel form should be updated."內"who the result failed"grammar有問題,可改為"whose results failed",而整句可改動次序寫為:

    "In the Excel form, the name list of students whose results failed should be updated"

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  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    奇摩搜尋“名牌瘋”我每次都是去這里看

    咧侦凁叜

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  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

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    亗具呗倚勺亽

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  • 6 years ago

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    Janice 的答案好!

    既然是她加入知識+ 6年以來的第一次回答,那我應該禮讓一下~

    我把以上的答案搬到意見欄吧~

    祝 大家新年進步~

    2014-01-01 23:25:55 補充:

    首先,中文的用詞需要修正。

    我們用「及格」,不用「合格」,來表達成績。

    「合格」用於產品檢測是否符合規格。

    原句:

    「在Excel 人名表中,成績不及格的學生資料需要更新。」

    〔此句其實也有問題,不過大家都明白意思,不是「成績不及格的學生資料需要更新」,而是「若有學生成績不及格,該學生的資料則需要更新」。〕

    原句試寫:

    The students who the result failed in the name list of Excel form should be updated.

    2014-01-01 23:26:05 補充:

    分析:

    上句寫作有數個問題。

    首先,who the result failed 的用法似乎不妥當,可用 who failed 或 whose result is a failing grade。

    第二,the name list of Excel form 似乎太冗長,也有一點兒怪。可以直接寫 the name list in Excel,或甚至更簡單的 the Excel name list。

    2014-01-01 23:26:15 補充:

    第三,你的原句是想指 資料要更新,但你的作句 是學生要更新。

    試用句式分析去縮短你的句子:The students (who the result failed in the name list of Excel form) should be updated 即 The students should be updated.

    2014-01-01 23:26:24 補充:

    原句改寫:

    In the Excel name list, the record of those students who failed should be updated.

    For those students who have a failing grade, their records need to be updated in the Excel file.

    In the Excel name list, the students whose results are failed are subject to record updates.

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  • 6 years ago

    我會建議咁寫:

    Records of those students who have failed should be updated in the Excel name list.

    Source(s): www.AceEnglishSolutions.com
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