英文問題 有禮的書信

Please offer some better idea, I would like to ask the school regards of my course application: Please may I check the progress of my application of ACCA full-time course? Could you please check for me once you are convenience? My full name is..., nationality: Taiwan, DOB ...... Thank you very much. I am... show more Please offer some better idea, I would like to ask the school regards of my course application:

Please may I check the progress of my application of ACCA full-time course? Could you please check for me once you are convenience? My full name is..., nationality: Taiwan, DOB ...... Thank you very much.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Update: What can I tell them, to let them know that I am desperate.
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