幫我看一下英文作文

作文的圖片網址

http://a0916068709.pixnet.net/album/photo/25796671...

    Amanda was a business woman who had a severe allergy so she always could not afford to live in foul environment. One day, when she got on the bus smelling a flavor like long time did not deal with garbage. Slowly, that flavor began to approach her; suddenly, she turned out and found a boy not only didn’t wear shores, but also flapped by his hands. Unfortunately, there are not have any seat just ones so bad moods that she made her eyes focus on outside scenery, but she still smell a foul flavor from boy.

    

     Therefore, she stood up and search for help. When police come to there, Amanda pointed at that boy. The police asked for boy what happen, finding boy was sleeping. They try to make boy wake up and spent lots of times. When they make him recover awareness in time, the bus just arrived at destination. The boy had a good spirits but Amanda had a bad spirits. Finally, nothing to solve.

麻煩幫我挑出錯誤 .我貼在word上沒錯字剩下就文法了 謝謝大家幫忙 :)

2 Answers

Rating
  • 7 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Amanda is a business woman who has a severe allergy so she couldn't stand to live in the foul environment. One day, she smelt a foul-smelling like rotted garbage when she got on a bus. The smell slowly filled the air around her;she turned away and found out that a boy didn’t wear shoes was flapping his feet. Unfortunately, there wasn't any seat more. She was upset and forced herself to focus on the scenery outside,but she still could smell the smelling from the boy.

    Finally,she stood up and looked for helps. Amanda reported it when a police came in. The police wanted to inquire the boy but he was falling sleep. They spent lots of times to wake the boy up.Lastly,when they made him recover from sleep,the bus just arrived at the destination. The boy got great vigor,on the contrary, Amanda didn't. Nothing has been solved in the end.

    ps.文章有些奇怪,但很有趣:)

    Source(s): me&google
  • 7 years ago

    Amanda, an ex-businesswoman, has a severe allergy that she could hardly live in an environment dingy.One day, she got on a smelly bus and turned to a boy flapped his feet withoutwearing shoes when she noticed an unpleasant smell. Since there was no otherseat available, she could just look outside of window bearing the boy’s smell. Thereafter, she stoodup and searched for assistance. When the police came, she informed him/her ofthe smelly boy. The police wanted to realize the reason from the boy but was invain for he was deeply asleep. They spent quite a long period to wake him up. Bythe time the boy finally awoke, the bus arrived at (Amanda’s/its) destination atthe same time. There was nothing being solved. Amanda was exhausted and the boywas energetic after the journey.

    2013-11-06 06:09:48 補充:

    從word貼過來,有得自兩兩黏再一起,請自行分開嘿~~

    Source(s): 我的親自翻譯
Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.