RHH: Rate this rap verse I made + (BQ's)?

As always, here's the instrumental: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=v1ALnWlWiHw Looks like it's gonna be a great day today Get some fresh air then head off my way Call up Dope Boy to get the daily doses Said P. Monch bought it all to get his mind to focus Nevermind then guess I'll go to the... show more As always, here's the instrumental:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=v1ALnWlWiHw

Looks like it's gonna be a great day today
Get some fresh air then head off my way
Call up Dope Boy to get the daily doses
Said P. Monch bought it all to get his mind to focus
Nevermind then guess I'll go to the record store
See Marcus buying a vinyl copy of Liquid Swords
Shake hands as common as a song with a chorus
Pass by the book store see Beni buying another thesaurus
Dial up Swoope's cell you still working at Taco Bell?
Says yep it's bad but it's my only income so oh well...
Pass by my old school visit some of the teachers
Heard Fear's on the basketball team watching from the bleachers
Nah just jokes but I heard he still tokes
Also heard Esco quit the pipes full of smoke
One thing he should not quit is his production
Have D and him on my album a classic in construction
Leave but see Eric on the scene driving down the street
His brother Wallace just sitting in the passenger seat
At a stop then visit the open mic night
See Jordan battling just to get his mind right
I'll sit back let him have his moment to shine
Don't want to have to beat him a second time
Give him a nod time to go had my fun
Heading back home the moon replaced the sun
Lay in bed rest my head eyes shut halfway
Look back at what I've done today

Wanted more regs but didn't want it too long.

BQ: Favorite line?
BQ2: A song you wish a rapper never made?
BQ3: Roots or Outkast?
BQ4: Do you write lyrics every now and then?

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