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妞〃 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 8 years ago

英文 幫忙翻譯以下的文章

盡量翻譯的漂亮一點 還有段落分明 謝謝

In the ancient past, there was a hero named Hou Yi who was excellent at shooting. His wife was Chang E. One year, the ten suns rose in the sky together, causing great disaster to people. Hou Yi shot down nine of the suns and left only one to provide light. An immortal admired Yi and sent him the elixir of immortality. Hou Yi did not want to leave Chang'e and be immortal without her, so he let Chang'e keep the elixir. But Feng Meng, one of his apprentices, knew this secret. So, on the fifteenth of August in the lunar calendar, when Yi went hunting, Feng Meng broke into Yi's house and forced Chang'e to give the elixir to him. Chang'e refused to do so. Instead, she swallowed it and flew into the sky. Since she loved her husband very much and hoped to live nearby, she chose the moon for her residence. When Yi came back and learned what had happened, he felt so sad that he displayed the fruits and cakes Chang'e liked in the yard and gave sacrifices to his wife. People soon learned about these activities, and since they also were sympathetic to Chang'e they participated in these sacrifices with Yi.

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請問這個文法上是否都正確無誤呢?

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  • sammy
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    8 years ago
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    在中國很久很久以前,有位英雄 人物名叫后羿,他有一位美如天仙的妻子名叫嫦娥。他最讓人稱道的就是,他能百步穿楊,人們都稱他為神射手。

    有一年,天上同時升起了十個酷熱的大太陽,把百姓的農作物都曬死了,造成民不聊生的大災難。后羿便拿起神弓,一口氣射下了九個太陽,留下一個好照亮世界。

    有位修練成仙的道人很欣賞他,便賜給他一顆吃了能長生不死的仙丹。后羿不想丟下心愛的妻子嫦娥,獨自一人成仙,因此,就讓嫦娥來保管這顆仙丹。但這個秘密卻被他的一個徒弟逢蒙知道了。逢蒙這個忘恩負義的畜生,在農曆八月十五那天,乘后羿外出打獵,闖進后羿的府中,向嫦娥逼討仙丹。嫦娥當然不給,但擋不住逢蒙的進逼,情急之下便一口吞下了仙丹。沒想到吞下仙丹的嫦娥,像斷線的風箏,不停地飄到天上去了。由於,嫦娥深愛她的老公,希望不要飄離太遠,因此,她努力掙扎向月亮的方向飄去,終於被月亮攔下,她便暫時住在月宮了。

    當后羿打獵回來,聽了這件事情的經過,以為嫦娥已歸天離開了人世,感到非常難過。於是,他便拿出了嫦娥最愛吃的水果、糕餅,放在院中祭拜亡妻。人們知道以後,也非常同情嫦娥的不幸遭遇,便參與后羿祭拜的活動。這就是中秋節吃月餅的典故。

    2013-09-01 01:31:50 補充:

    Sorry. I misunderstood you.

    一般說故事,很久以前多用 Once upon a time

    excellent at shooting 通常是神槍手,可以用 archery

    His wife .... 可以寫成 He married with a beautiful girl named Chang Er.

    到此為第一段開場白。

    2013-09-01 01:55:41 補充:

    one year 可以用 one day 因為人類經不起 10 個太陽曬幾天

    knew this secret 通常會用 found out this secret

    其實,整篇的文法都沒什麼可以挑剔。

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