Jimmy Ke asked in 社會與文化語言 · 7 years ago

請英文高手幫忙!!英文閱讀心得文法檢查180字而已(孤雛淚)

Book Report: Oliver Twist was sent to the orphanage after he was born

because his mom died. In his childhood, he led a tragic life and had been

though many difficulties. But at the end of the story, with the help of many

people, especially Mr. Brownlow. He found out his real identity. Also the bad

guys in the story had reaped what they sowed!

My impression after reading this story:

We need to be thankful for what we have. We are very fortunate that we

have such a worm and sweet family who always look after us. So, we can’t

complain all the time. Instead, we can do something meaningful to help

people in need. As a student, we might not have lots of money to donate, but

we can provide the orphans with love and care by spending some time at the

orphanage accompanying them. Let them experience the word “Love”.

I not only read the story but also borrowed the movie which was produced by

BBC. To be honest, I cried many time during the movie. It was heartbreaking.

麻煩揪出錯誤文法!!

Update:

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虛心接受指教!!!

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  • 笙富
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    7 years ago
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    您好

    Book Report: Oliver Twist was sent to the orphanage after he was born.Because his mom died. In his childhood, he led a tragic life and had been.Though many difficulties. But at the end of the story, with the help of manyPeople, especially Mr. Brownlow. He found out his real identity.

    Also the bogeys in the story had reaped what they sowed!

    My impression after reading this story: We need to be thankful for what we have. We are very fortunate that we have such a warm and sweet family who always looks after us. We can provide the orphans with love and care by spending some time at the Orphanage accompanying them. So, we can’t Complain all the times. Instead, we can do something meaningful to help people in need. As a student, we might not have lots of money to donate, but. Let them experience the word “Love”.I not only read the story but also borrowedthe movie which was produced by BBC. To be honest, I cried many time duringthe movie. It was heartbreaking. 供您參考。

  • 7 years ago

    Basically, there is no serious grammatical error, but a few misspell:

    though ==> through

    worm ==> warm

    look ==> looks

    time ==> times

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