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I need to rate this resume before I give it in. What do you think? Patrick Abraham Patrickabraham9@hotmail.com|347-948-2699| Brooklyn, New York Objective To secure a challenging position using my exceptional commitment to safety, quality, teamwork, and continuous improvements. Experience Walgreens... show more I need to rate this resume before I give it in. What do you think?

Patrick Abraham
Patrickabraham9@hotmail.com|347-948-26...
Brooklyn, New York

Objective
To secure a challenging position using my exceptional commitment to safety, quality, teamwork, and continuous improvements.

Experience
Walgreens (Service Clerk)
Brooklyn, New York
March 2013- Currently Employed
(718) 564-2380
• Key player in maintaining store inventory for customer shopping.
• Known for exemplary customer service, team player mindset and exceptional cash-handling accuracy.
• Coordinated with store support personnel to resolve store issues.
• Provided service and maintenance on machines crucial to photo development.
• Swiftly developed customer photos and offered specialized options per occasion.

Dominique F. Juste and Associates (Office Manager Assistant)
Brooklyn, New York
June 2009-August 2009 (Summer Youth Employment Program)
718-693-4060
• Worked with team of five other office assistants to retrieve and store patient files alphanumerically.
• Rated as one of the most useful assistants due to reliability.
• Excelled at alpha numeric patient filing and file retrieval.
Skills and Achievements
• Proficient with Microsoft Word and PowerPoint.
• First rate team work and leadership skills.
• Excellent interpersonal skills and a commitment to customer service.
• Volunteered at an after-school catering to elementary school children.
• Ensures tasks are completed correctly and on time.
Education
New York City College of Technology
Computer Information Systems (Major)
2012-(Projected 2015)
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