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One day, a boy is called John, taking the bus go to school. He played cellphone and sit on Priority Seat. He focused on cellphone so that don't want to take the seat for the old man. Pretending missing him, he go on siting on Priority Seat. Soon after, John was broken a feet when he played basketball. Next... show more One day, a boy is called John, taking the bus go to school. He played cellphone and sit on Priority Seat. He focused on cellphone so that don't want to take the seat for the old man. Pretending missing him, he go on siting on Priority Seat.
Soon after, John was broken a feet when he played basketball. Next time , he took the bus that he walked with a crutch. There has a girl sit on Priority Seat. She was reading book and missing his feet was broken. John was feeling very ashamed and sad that he remember he was same with the girl.
After that time , he learned what the courtesy is . And he begin take seat for who need it.
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