RP--I was listening to James Bond themes,and a parody came to mind.Would you C/C pls?+thanks?
iRONSPiNE (menacing music playing)
His mind was kind, his soul was gold
But then a crash turned his heart cold
His nerve once sure, his backbone true
But what was left broke him in two
So he layed out as things went in
At four parts metal, one part skin
Just building rage right down the line
'Til he stepped off as iRONSPiNE
And every rogue state wanted bad
Well that's exactly what he had
The other fools so good, so true
Received his spine , it went right through
Today he's killing at his trade
An evil grin and verteblade
He'll have his reign if he's inclined
'Cause you can't rust an iRONSPiNE
COPYRIGHT 5-20-2013 William Weitzel. All Rights Reserved
NOTE: My brother just had back surgery, this is his nickname!
Thomas, actually my brother did have spinal surgery about a month ago, and they used a bunch of screws and brackets, so the poem's not that far off. Dave my brother weighs 305 lbs, and he's 5'8'', so he may have caused a lot of his own problems. I'm 5'4'', and about 145, so I think he's adopted.
Anyway Thomas, a lot of the poem is fictitious, and that's good because if Dave had a weapon in his spine, I'd have to hire Bond. Mini Me did call and said they want to make a film--------NOT!----Take Care, Good to hear from you----Keep Writing----------william
Thomas, as far as the small i's, I just did it to catch the (i's) get it? I did the same thing with the "Falling" poem about a falling leaf, I put the title vertical above the poem. Business Administration was my major in college, and I always go overboard on the marketing aspect of everything. I had to post this poem 4 times to get 6 answers, so I'm not doing too good at marketing, or asking questions, I guess---------william
- ThomasLv 77 years agoBest Answer
Man, I would have some close to getting this one ww,
but just worked my a-rse off on a poem/song....has a
lot to do with one of your prior arrangements, which
by the way was outstanding, lol (can't stop laughing
and can't keep a straight face, sorry) I put comment
on that poem.
Good sentence structure used and rhyme spine eloquent
I don't get the small i's though, unless was his first name
Ron>? just thinking out loud.
Now able to identify with Ironspine it put a breath of life
into your piece, for real.
- Experto CredoLv 77 years ago
Gosh, I can't wait for the movie to come out. It certainly sounds more interesting than a lot of stuff being offered this year.
(The theme for Thunderball might work as the tune)